Literatura Hiperbreve

by lingonberryjelly

I was reading on Spanish Wikipedia about literatura hiperbreve, a kind of fiction distributed via SMS services, and limited to the text message character count, 140 or 150.

Here is my attempt, coming in at 139:


Her father said Janey, and Jane woke up thinking anyone who matters is dead, but she heard the crickets and remembered who lay next to her.